雅思作文流程图类

分类

• 工序流程图与植物生长过程图

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• 按顺序分别描述流程图中所示的每一个步骤的情况

  • 第一步：对步骤1进行描述
  • 第二步：对步骤2进行描述
  • 以此类推

时态

• 一般现在时
• 植物生长状态
  • 主时态：一般现在时

语态

• 主动（植物生长）
• 被动（工序流程）

段落组成

高分语言特点

1. 内容完整性
   • 注意数字、文字等解释性内容
2. 变换词汇的表达方式
   • 第一步：First, Initially
   • 第二步：Second, The following stage
   • 第三步：Third, Entering the final phase
3. 合并描述步骤形成长句
   • First 对步骤A的描述。Next, 对步骤B的描述（×）
   • First 对步骤A的描述，following immediately by 对步骤B的描述

举例

改写段

The two diagrams illustrates stages of soybean growth and the production of soy milk, respectively.

细节段1

During the growth of soybeans，first, after the soybean seeds are placed in the soil, they grow into sprouts in about 2 weeks.

In the next phase, the sprouts gradually produce more leaves and flowers, which then transform into pods. The entire process of transitioning from sprout to pod takes about 4 weeks.

Entering the final phase, the pods mature in 2 weeks and yield soybeans.

细节段2

In the process of making soy milk, soybeans are first soaked in water about 6 hours, and then the soaked soybeans are grounded, from which the raw soy milk is obtained.

Notably, the ground soybean residue left over from this process can be used to feed livestock.

Next, the raw soy milk is heated to 180 degrees to ensure sterilization.

In the final stage, the soy milk is bottled and packaged for distribution.

概述段

In total, it **takes 6 phase(about 8 weeks)**to grow soybeans, while the soy milk production process is much faster, requiring only 4 steps.